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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Oct 12, 2011 0:02:45 GMT -5
Yeah....don't ask....Just some quick think I did at one in the morning.... WARNING: Free verse, misuse of grammar edit: Revised it so it sounds a bit better.....
America. I'm sorry. I’m sorry I’m not right. That I don’t meet your needs. I’m sorry for being so blind. For stealing you away from him. I'm sorry for wanting you, For breaking your friendship. I’m sorry for saying yes, for accepting your ring. I'm just driving a wedge between you two. I'm sorry for loving you, Because I know you love him more. Because I know I can never love you as much as he does. I'm sorry for everything I've put you through. But most of all, I’m sorry for not being him.
Yeah....If you didn't get it, it's suppose to be Angel apologizing to America for 1.) Taking him from England, 2.) For causing them to fight by agreeing to marry him, and 3.) For not being England (mainly because she believes that America loves England more.) Anyway.....yeah, it's crappy, I know..... I'll probably take it down later... Due to popular demand this'll be staying up. reviews are loved~.
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Post by isabellaluvsu on Oct 12, 2011 1:07:12 GMT -5
I like the meaning behind it! I really do C: Don't be so hard on yourself!
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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Oct 12, 2011 13:38:57 GMT -5
Thanks Lizzy *hugs* But I'm going to edit it a bit so it flows smoother.....as soon as I gan remember what I wanted to add.....
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Post by Walker Jones on Oct 12, 2011 19:39:48 GMT -5
I really liked this. Don't take it down Chica.
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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Oct 12, 2011 20:59:11 GMT -5
Thanks chicka. I'll probably leave it up, but it's just not some of my best work....
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Post by Walker Jones on Oct 12, 2011 21:04:52 GMT -5
Yay! You're keeping it.
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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Oct 12, 2011 21:07:29 GMT -5
*sigh* Si, I'm keeping it.
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Post by Walker Jones on Oct 12, 2011 21:20:57 GMT -5
*hugs* Please don't be sad.
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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Oct 12, 2011 21:27:51 GMT -5
*hugs back* I'm not sad! Really!
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Post by Walker Jones on Oct 12, 2011 21:35:48 GMT -5
Good.
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Post by Alfred F. Jones on Oct 15, 2011 22:33:25 GMT -5
this is so awesome chandi ;-; I feel like I should be the one with a sorry poem, I feel so bad
I can imagine this type of thing being in Silys diary and Americas just like o-o
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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Oct 16, 2011 19:46:09 GMT -5
^-^ Grazie Heta~. You don't have to. I was in a weird mood when I wrote it.....
It would be....why would America be snooping through Angel's diary?
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Post by Alfred F. Jones on Oct 16, 2011 19:50:32 GMT -5
welcome Chandi~ (were the awesome duo you know?) even if you were in a weird mood, its nice
... hes America. Im sure hed be snooping through even his babes diary~
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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Oct 16, 2011 19:57:32 GMT -5
yeah.....this has actually been in my head for forever, so it was nice to write it down....
OG course he would be....then Angel would hit him with the wooden spoon. XD
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Post by Alfred F. Jones on Oct 16, 2011 19:59:38 GMT -5
yup, its always good to right down your ideas.
pfft that be true
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