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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 29, 2012 23:15:58 GMT -5
... Ok in personal head-cannon my Hawaii is the eldest of the states because she used to be Hawaii the nation. I refuse to write this sudden plunny I got where America marries Hawaii because I have nowhere for it to go, no idea for a plot really, just a sudden what if...
If anyone wants to adopt the idea, feel free.
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 29, 2012 23:19:31 GMT -5
Hm... I dunno, I know she used to be a country, but so did a few of the states. *thinks*
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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 29, 2012 23:30:24 GMT -5
*shrugs* out of all the former countries that are states I believe Hawaii is the eldest of them. The others were not their own separate Nations for as long an amount of time as far as I've seen when looking things up.
Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong. History isn't my strong suit.
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 29, 2012 23:35:02 GMT -5
Ah well.
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Post by Emily Jones on Mar 20, 2012 15:05:02 GMT -5
Alright, remember how a long while back I mentioned having an idea along the lines of Little Boy Lasagna? It refuses to write itself better like I wanted it to. >.< Anyone wanna see what I've got and either say it's fine as it is or help get more written?
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Mar 21, 2012 0:48:42 GMT -5
Sure.
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Post by Emily Jones on Mar 21, 2012 9:33:36 GMT -5
Want me to PM it to you or just post it here?
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Mar 21, 2012 10:27:09 GMT -5
Either one works. *shrugs*
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Post by Anya Braginskaya-Jones on Mar 21, 2012 10:37:31 GMT -5
K. I keep looking at it and I'm not happy with parts of it, but I can't figure out how to fix them. If anyone is OOC...I don't really know all the characters as well as I try to before writing fic with them.
Veneziano's Stew ((what I got for it))
It started with a sneeze. Nothing big, right? "Ve, maybe it's like Kiku says and somebody is talking about me."
Then there was a cough. "I just swallowed something wrong, ve." "Swallowed what wrong, air?" "Ve, fratello, don't be so mean!"
The cough steadily got worse, and he would sometimes have fits where he coughed until he had no air left and was still trying to cough. ((A/N - I have these occasionally, they suck muchly)) "Stupid-I'm taking you to a doctor." "But fratello~." "Shut up, Feli."
The doctor thought it was just a cold, and gave him medicine. It didn't help. After that, Vene started having less and less energy. "Ve..." "What's wrong?" "I want pasta, but I'm so tired..."
It was actually Lorenzo who figured it out. He had been out and saw a teenager that looked exactly like Vene. He didn't tell Vene, not wanting to stress the boy while he was ill, but told Lovino and Angelica. "I know why Vene's sick. He's being replaced by a new personification." "What?! Chigi - what bastard is gonna try and take his place?" "I only saw the boy a moment, but he looks exactly like him. I wouldn't be surprized if his name was Feliciano Vargas too." "So...what do we do?" "I don't know."
It was easy for the three to decide that this new person needed to die so that Vene could live. North Italy didn't need a new person, it had Vene. "Just leaving him for dead is a bad idea, for Vene to be this ill the boy had gained some of the connection to the land, so that part of the land will suffer." "Fuckin'...what do we do, then?" "What if..." "What, Angelica?" "Well..." She explained her idea. "It might work. May as well try." And so, Angel went out to find this boy and become "friends" with him.
When she first saw the boy, she was amazed at how much he looked like Vene. He was even named Feliciano Vargas, just like Lorenzo had suspected. He came over and started flirting with her. She made it clear she wasn't interested in him that way, and they started to become friends. Well, she thought, at least the kid doesn't 've' like Vene...
"How close are you?" "It should work, now." "Good. Vene's worse, do it tomorrow." "Not a problem."
"Hey, wanna come to my place? I'll give you a ride." "Sure!"
"H-hey, what are you-" "Because you exist, my fratello is dying. So you need to not exist." "You're crazy!" "No, just willing to do whatever it takes to keep my famiglia together." Vene will get better, Renny will be happy, and Lovino might smile again.
"Ve, Angelica, what's this?" "Special Lasagna for my sick fratello. Vi, I know you haven't felt like eating much, but try for me, va bene?" "Si~." Vene started feeling better and gained an appetite after the first bite.
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Mar 21, 2012 15:24:40 GMT -5
Well. *grins* Lorenzo's made his first appearance outside of the myself, Kitty and Apples. *hugs* I like it muchly, though you could add a bit at the ending.
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Post by Emily Jones on Mar 21, 2012 15:36:16 GMT -5
Ending being that last bit where she's serving Vene the lasagna?
...maybe after it's tweaked a little I should post it in the Fanfiction section here.
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Mar 21, 2012 23:49:01 GMT -5
Si~ Un comploment to the chef Apples!
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Post by Matthew Williams on Mar 21, 2012 23:56:54 GMT -5
hmmm...to add to the very end...
In between bites Vene complimented his sister. "Ve, Angelica, this is wonderful~! What did you do different?" She giggled, knowing she would never tell. "If I told you it wouldn't be my secret ingredient, vi." "You would tell your ill fratello, si? Please, Angelica~."
Years later he was still asking, and she still wasn't telling.
((ok, really going to sleep now))
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Mar 23, 2012 11:15:23 GMT -5
I like it~ it has more detail~ And I like the last two lines about him asking but her not saying anything. Very nice touch. *nods* I like it muchly.
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Post by Sadiq Adnan on Mar 24, 2012 3:22:05 GMT -5
Ok, so I read both this one and the one from Chandi, would anyone have a problem if I tried one with Sadiq, but no one was around to help him like this
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