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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Dec 23, 2011 17:05:10 GMT -5
Yeah, the inspiration for this hit me while I was cleaning...
Just so everyone know, it's from Angel's POV, and she's talking to America after she's had one to many. ~~~
Just Need To Forget
One cup, two cup Three cup, four, Five cup, six cup, seven, maybe eight more It doesn’t matter to me Does it have what I want; does it have what I need? That liquid which I crave? I need it mi amore. Why? I need to forget. What do I need to forget? Everything. The screams of my men as they were slaughtered. The look of hurt in my brothers’ eyes. The bullets perching my chest. My body trying to cave in on me. Please, just give me what I need. No? No! Why not? Please, please mi amore. Just give it to me. Why? I told you why! Please. Please. I just need it to forget everything.
~~~ Hum....debating on whether or not I should do America's response to this....
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Post by Walker Jones on Jan 8, 2012 23:45:55 GMT -5
I really liked this, It was well executed and the liquid metaphor-ish thing was really interesting. America next!
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Post by Elena Jones on Jan 9, 2012 0:35:57 GMT -5
xD metaphor-ish. XDDD I'm glad you liked it though. And I'll work on his.
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Post by Walker Jones on Jan 9, 2012 1:17:47 GMT -5
Awesome.
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Post by Alfred F. Jones on Jan 9, 2012 19:08:51 GMT -5
Awesome! *jumping around* Do the next one, do it!
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Post by Angelica Vargas-Jones on Jan 9, 2012 20:48:03 GMT -5
I'm glad you like it. *snuggles* I'm going to work on the next one sometime during the week...
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Post by Alexis Jones on Jan 9, 2012 21:00:09 GMT -5
I'm glad you wrote it *cling-snuggle* Awesome sauce! Thankies!
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 11, 2012 21:28:37 GMT -5
It's so amazing I'm going to comment about it being amazing on my second profile so no one knows it's actually Weaver who's commenting on how amazing it is twice.. *shady glance*
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