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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 24, 2012 10:02:36 GMT -5
I love your story, I'm not usually overly big on horror 'cause I get scared easy but I can't help but read it 'cause it's so interesting too! I just kinda have to find funny/light fluffy stuff to see afterwards. *glomps & cuddles* You're seriously doing really well with it. Although maybe I shoulds not have read it all over right after onee-chan left for class so I'm all alone and I have to go downstairs to do laundry.... *whimpers* At least it's not nighttime...
Maybe I should see if I can wake head!Prussia up because then it won't be all quiet in my head like it's gone now.
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 24, 2012 10:06:36 GMT -5
I think knowing the characters before reading it helps, I'm not a big horror fan either. (though I do read it) but I don't find it very interesting. Ha, really? I've had people say they think my writing's not going anywhere. *nuzzles* Do you want Lorenzo to help?
Lorenzo: Why am I suddenly a psychiatrist?
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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 24, 2012 10:14:39 GMT -5
I don't read/watch horror much 'cause I seriously get freaked out a bit easy. Everyone says the ring wasn't scary... I find the story interesting. I don't really know the characters, but part or reading is learning who the characters are.
I think your writing is good. Your scenes can be a bit short but they're amazing.
*hugs Lorenzo* I don't need a psychiatrist I just needs hugs so I can get brave enough to go downstairs and do laundry when the house is QUIET. A little spooked + quiet = me holed up in my room.
It's been a while since I've been home by myself... I forgot how freaking quiet it can be...
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 24, 2012 10:19:28 GMT -5
Thanks a lot, you've been such a great friend. *hugs*
I know, I'm hoping to elongate them a bit more.
Lorenzo: *hugs*
Houses which are empty tend to be quiet.
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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 24, 2012 10:24:41 GMT -5
*hugs* It's nice getting to spend more time chatting with you. You're a really good friend too. Usually I'm not sure that anyone really reads my stuff. The only story I have with a lot of feedback is the one I think is the worst and can't seem to pick up again which means that people are pissed at me -_-
There are probably places where you can expand I think every story has some of those. But some bits like that last one.... even if they're short I don't think they need more because it's just captured so well.
*still hugging*
When you haven't been alone in weeks and weeks it's easy to forget how quiet quiet is if that makes any sense.
Ok so I went downstairs for a little bit and.... the f'ing smoke detector downstairs did that on purpose! It decided to suddenly go off and test just when I got over there. Scared the living daylights out of me. So yeah.... came back up here to get away from it while it did it's thing.
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 24, 2012 11:04:57 GMT -5
Si, it is. I love getting to know people more cause I wind up feeling kind of awkward chatting online to someone I hardly know. And I have that problem too- I dropped a lot of stuff on my Fanfiction account because my life has gotten so hectic, so I have a couple angry letters. ^-^'
Awesomeness. *f-yeah America face*
Lorenzo: *coughs* Ahem.
I get what you mean, physically my house isn't that quiet but I haven't spoken to anyone my age in about four-five weeks, so I'm a tad bit lonely.
Oh no! Are you okay?!
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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 24, 2012 11:23:13 GMT -5
^-^ Me too, although I do try to keep my crazy brain a bit more in check sometimes so I don't scare you guys.... Most of my stuff on FFN is dropped, but at least a few I did remember to indicate were a while I'm in the mood only series.
*laughs*
*blinks* What? You're just huggable. *lets go*
I can understand that. *hugs*
I'm fine the detector is just very loud and needs to be replaced because it keeps testing for no reason and sometimes I think it's possessed because of the timing... My mother things it might be the lights but that doesn't explain the beeping and then stopping without testing or finishing the words when no one's down there.
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 24, 2012 11:26:11 GMT -5
Ha, you're a lot better about it than me then. XD
:3
Lorenzo: ...
Go ahed and keep hugging him, he'll thank you later. *hugs back*
Well, if it starts spitting black tar crap and you find any pictures with people in them have blacked out eyes and no bottom jaw contact moi.
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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 24, 2012 11:33:02 GMT -5
*laughs* I like writing a lot, but I also tend to get distracted so I have a note on my desktop reminding me of everything I need to finish right now xD
What? That's a compliment. *hugs again*
I will, but it might just be the thing that apparently used to scare us when we first moved until mom talked to it. She thinks it might be a former owner of the house. Maybe I should try talking to it xD
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 24, 2012 11:35:17 GMT -5
I should probably do that. =.=
Lorenzo: *pats head* Ve.
...True. *puts away grenade launcher*
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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 24, 2012 12:08:56 GMT -5
^-^ We'll see how much it helps. I have no idea if it will
*laughs* You're awesome Lorenzo.
Next time I'm downstairs maybe I'll scold it. xD But yeah, should it get weirder I'll be calling you.... and possibly TAPS xD
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 24, 2012 12:12:13 GMT -5
I would probably benefit from it. ^^;
Lorenzo: Grazie signora.
TAPS! HOORAY!
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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 24, 2012 12:24:56 GMT -5
Then go ahead and make yourself a note then '*hugs*
You're welcome ^-^
TAPS are pretty cool. I don't watch the show as much as Beth, but I like it.
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Post by Lorenzo da Firenze (Vargas) on Jan 24, 2012 12:28:43 GMT -5
*goes to write*
Lorenzo: *smiles back*
I haven't seen any of the recent episodes, but we have had Roto-rooter come to our house. XD
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Post by Carina Jones on Jan 24, 2012 12:34:24 GMT -5
*pats* I hope it helps you out well in it's notely duties ^-^
*laughs* I don't think we've had Roto-rooter come, but I know someone who saw one of the guys in a linens and things a couple years ago xD
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