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Post by Alfred F. Jones on Oct 26, 2011 21:14:51 GMT -5
Review for Chapter one: Interesting so far! I wouldnt expect them to be different ages- I wonder how old that would make them if shes 15 now. The memory is so sweet- and I feel so awful for how the treat Liz! For some reason though, it makes sense that there would only be one girl reaper every 100 years.
Review for Chapter two: Aaah snap What the hell are they doing to Lizzy!? I was really concerned there, but Romania stepping in was a pleasent surprise! I dunno why she hates him though, he seems pretty helpful... then again... Id be pretty angry and suspicious too, so... Interested in the next chapter! Will mod my post in a bit to read the next ones!
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Post by isabellaluvsu on Oct 27, 2011 16:05:06 GMT -5
I feel that these men had believed women are weak and insuperior, when in truth, Hungary can beat the shit out of them. C: Don't worry, I need to fix it as well. Thank you so much for reading! I was planning on reading your fic when I got the chance as well!
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Post by Alfred F. Jones on Oct 27, 2011 19:10:52 GMT -5
I think its fine without fixing- oh, forgot to mention, I loved the description of her falling from her cave. It was so frickn cool! Youre welcome. Yeah, Im pretty sure Hungary can kick some arse, I just want to see her KO everyone at once~ you dont really have to, its really short ^ ^;;
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